they really aren't that good at all, but I've been teaching myself guitar and a few friends wanted to start a band with me, so I've been considering some of my old writings that I've dug up. feel free to be totally honest and lemme know what you think. i know it sucks, it's an old one, I'll work on it. ;)
I can`t find the words
To explain how I feel.
But my actions will show
My intentions are real.
and all the beats you give my heart
are for every moment you've proven surreal.
it's your voice, your touch
that cunning smile
that gives me so many butterflies
you make it all worthwhile.
just hold me here,
we can fly for miles.
if i was given just one choice,
the decision to make it through,
I'd push everything away
just to be with you.
i'll work on it. i had to stop because i gotta go do homework. comments please! (:
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I vote yes!! this is so good! if you can, you should record you singing the song or whoever and put it on here so we can hear it too! :)
ReplyDeletethank you! :D a couple friends and i are working on making a band right now, and i'm hoping to do vocals. if i do, and we record this song i'll be sure to put it up! (: thank sooo much<3
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